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I fear I'll reiterate the apt remarks already made. You're a deft hand at - and seem to love - setting an atmosphere. In foreshadowing, you've a lovely, layered style ...

Hey Fand! Oy, you did post it. ^_^ ...made my morning; though now I've been fencing for going on 9 hours, I may not be too helpfully lucid. That aside, ...

Gyr, that was engaging and hilarious. ^_^ Excellent way of pulling it round, beginning with the end or ending with the beginning. As far as characters and dialogue, well - ...

The same, more or less, as I said in your LJ. ^_^ Honestly, Crysi, it fits with deceptive neatness into the plotline and characters of World's End. ^_^ You've hit ...

'Lo again, Winie. It looks as if you've got lyrics here, not specifically Lyric poetry. So I'll move it the right forum. As to the piece itself: You have a ...

Hello Winie. You know, poetry is made of verses, words like prose or speech, that need to connect to have a meaning. The first line somehow connected to the next; ...

Hey Pol. ^_^ It looks as if you've got a tale innately full of action; and a place to put it. Khor certainly looks hyperactively precocious enough to set things ...

I've gotten fond of Constable; and I love his cloud, though I'd never want to take it from him. ^_~ He wouldn't quite be Constable without it, and it wouldn't ...

'Lo Write Me. It seems you haven't even got a 'hey! like, so cool!' remark on this. ^_^'' Anyhow, that's rotten. I've only skimmed the first piece. But you have ...

Hullo Night Mistress, A joust has got to be as apt a way as any to begin a story; in truth, it ought to be brilliant. You have knights, action ...

Disturbingly painful, Mlle. Clau, a continuous assault of the grotesque and untoward.* In fact, it reminded me of its quote. Rammstein, when screaming, is just as relentless as the torture ...

Sokool, you write the most hilarious fable-like shorts. ^_^ I've got to agree with Crysi - don't give it away from the get! Why-Baby is a sidesplitting name there. But ...

Well met, Shafter...and rather a later meeting here as far as my intention. ^_^" Emon's story now. It's moving, isn't it? Rather quickly - but I think the sense of ...

Hey Amelia, To begin with, the illustrations of 'perfection' dropped here and there are apt - pinned hair; media illusivity. It is a sort of anti-perfection that, yes, ought to ...

Hello Liz, You have some intriguingly macabre imagery; some things quite evocative. Unfortunately, they're not really drawn together under anything too catching - they haven't the structure or the pol